After a lot of editing and creative input from my friend Katane I have been able to release Ariadoss and the Glumira Peace Initiative’s second chapter: The Executrix of Skandra X.
This chapter takes place right after the first and is told mainly from the point of view of Artificial Intellects or bots so the dialogue is mainly composed of short, declared sentences. This chapter will probably be the least lively as far as fighting sequences go but it is a respectable example of descriptive narration on my part.
The full text of the story may be found at:
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